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Old 08-05-2009, 04:41 PM
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I'm not sure what, exactly, you were trying to accomplish here (esp. since this is in landscape/cityscape, not portrait). But I find the composition problematic; I would have cropped out the two people on the right (and probably cloned-out their hands). They are distracting and make the focal point (which I take to be the woman with the cast?) less of a focal point.
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