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Originally Posted by flavio
Basically I like the picture, the lines, the sky and the composition.
Perhaps a few adjustments might help to improve it a bit more, along the lines of denja's response.
I would use a perspective tool to adjust the horizontal and verival lines.
I would get rid of the upper part of the building, which is breaking the flow.
I did some quick fix using the GIMP to better explain myself.
Here it goes:
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Flavio - I like the approach of looseing the the top of the building!
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