Hi Yeti,
Some eye contact would be great for the next one. She looks adorable. I'd love to see her eyes. As well, try not to cut off any body parts when composing. Her fingers are cut off and it would have been better if you got them in.
You got excellent focus. Kids can be hard as they move a lot. Good job.
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