Hi
Composition wise i think its a good concept, persoanlly i think it could do with cropping on the r/h side, take out the first doll with the overexposed highlights and maybe half of the second doll, this would bring the eyes of the dolls in focus a bit closer to the top r/h side.
The lighting seems a little warm to me, not sure if that was what you were aiming for in the shot.
Also there's a weird green line in the bottom left side, could be a reflection of something.
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