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Old 02-03-2009, 12:58 AM
nir3 nir3 is offline
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Talking A male portrait from practicing student - would like opinions.

Hello,
I started photography about 4 months ago and I've been trying to learn as much as I can. I've only been able to do mostly landscape, still life, etc., however, I'm really wanting to do portraiture so I'm hoping I could get some advice & critiques concerning the job I've done.

Below, I've taken about 9 shots with a subject (embedded only one, and I provided a link to the others since that's what the rules say).

I know that most of the problem in these is overexposure of the sky and one is pretty dark, but other than those two obvious things I would really love to hear other people's comments!
I am concerned about posing, post processing, composition, just the obvious things.

PS: Do these look sharp enough for you guys? So many portraits I see on studio's web sites are so extremely sharp I don't know if it has to do with their lens (I have a 28-90mm 5.6 kit lens ) or post processing techniques - anyone have a clue? I actually had to sharpen every one of these!

These pictures were taken with: Canon 400D with 28-90mm f/5.6 lens. EXIF data is below.

1.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9487.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/2000 second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F4.5
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 200
#Focal Length = 50 mm

2.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9557.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/160 second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F8
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 100
#Focal Length = 62 mm

3.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9550.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/20 second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F4.5
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 100
#Focal Length = 47mm

4.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9497.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/400 second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F5
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 200
#Focal Length = 65mm

5.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9495.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/400second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F5
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 200
#Focal Length = 64 mm

6.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9486.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/1600 second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F5
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 200
#Focal Length = 64mm

7.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9469.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/100 second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F4.5
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 200
#Focal Length = 35 mm

8.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9463.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/160 second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F5.6
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 200
#Focal Length = 41 mm

9.
http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d1...t/IMG_9461.jpg
# Exposure Time = 1/100second
# Lens F-Number/F-Stop = F5.6
# Exposure Program = aperture priority (3)
# ISO Speed Ratings = 200
#Focal Length = 64mm


Thanks so much I hope I get to learn a lot to improve on my skills! Goodnight

Last edited by nir3; 02-03-2009 at 03:17 AM.
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