hey- me again- make-up girl. i know this lady isn't the biggest fan of make-up, but she needs to get over it and pop out those eyes. her eyes seem like they could be very striking, but she is so washed out, I can't see anything about her face. just a little bit of shadow, some higlighter along the brow bone, and in the inside corners of the eyes, and for god's sake, give her some mascara and lip gloss!
also- for her happiness with these shots, have her straighten up her back and pull her bra band down to smooth out that back-fat area we women all struggle with! i know i hate mine, and i hate seeing it in pictures.
i like the burgundy sweater better, as well. she needs some color.
good luck!