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Originally Posted by katsclass
went back to the original and tried again as I had a feeling I got more right in camera than I did in pp last time. How does this one look/feel?
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I hate to say it, but it still has a cyan cast (too little red), but now it also has a blue cast (too little yellow). I think this means there is still too much green, but I am not sure. Plus there is just no "weight" in the photo -- I don't know how to describe this precisely -- but there is little differentiation from your subjects and their background.
I have had a small go at your picture (posted below). If you open both in Photoshop and paste one over the other, you will see big differences. The skin color is much more warm in mine (red + yellow). The shadows reveal more detail (her hair, his jeans, and the soles of his shoes). Not perfect, I will admit, but a direction of improvement I think.
Previously mentioned problems such as the lack of detail on her arm, etc., seem out of reach for me.
