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Old 05-28-2008, 09:30 PM
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Originally Posted by vandergus View Post
...vignette shot (that's not an official term, I just made it up)...
I like that, very descriptive term - maybe you need to "coin" it...

Regarding the photograph, composition-wise is good, the focus is on the wrong subject - the eyes are usually attracted to the human form. You should focus on the hand or better yet, use a smaller aperture and capture the tiles, hand and glass in sharp focus.

The light and mood are great.
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