I like the conversion however (there always is a however isn't there?) I feel that the lighting setup is wrong in this image. The light is stronger on her body and leg which draws attention to that part of the image and away from her face. (unless you were trying to put the focus on that part of the subject) It would be better to move the light to a different position.
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Rex K
The view from my "office" doesn't suck. 
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