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Old 03-06-2008, 08:09 PM
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its well shot and the contrast is nice, however i think the dress is a bit blown out. some of it just seems to meld together towards the left side.

i also agree with nathan, the pose shes in is a little awkward for me. i spent the first few minutes just trying to figure it out. i asked "is the whole white area her dress", "how is the bottle there", and "if the bottle isnt falling, how the heck did he shoot this?!?". but i did enjoy asking myself the last question.

i might have given more light to the right side as her face is hard to read in the shadows, leaving the dress to become the subject. hope this helps! nice shooting.
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