Very good idea on the pose there are just 2 things tht jump right out at me.
While she is looking down, she is only looking down with her eyes and more pronounced head tilt would better convey the "looking down" as it is it kinda looks like she blinked. Seeing both of there eyes would help a lot.
The other thing that is mildly distracting is that I can see her bra under her shirt. As I work my way down the image I get stuck there. I little post processing would take care of that.
The idea behind it is great though, keep it up!
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