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Old 02-13-2008, 03:37 PM
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Originally Posted by Khaled L.J View Post
thx ... u dont have any comments ?
Not when I'm doing a quick spot of moderation before lunch

I think the colours are excellent - blue, green and yellow fit well together. Is that the natural lighting of this scene?

I am not so convinced about the composition. In particular, I think the main tower is a bit too near the centre of the frame and awkwardly truncated at the top. I think it might work better to have the centre line of the tower a third of the way in from the left and to leave some space above the top of the tower. Moving the frame up would also removed the greenery that pops up at the bottom of the frame and looks rather untidy.

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