Thank you very much for the feed back. I had not considered blurring the infocus flowers to help with the composition, great tip, thanks.
I must admit I liked the top left and right corners where they fade out quite dark, one with a green hue and the other with brown hues but is see the improvements with your crop!
What is a vaginette (however it's spelt) I thought it was salad dressing!
I look forward to some more critiques
EDIT: here is my version using the feedback so far. I think I was a little heavy with the blur brush!