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Originally Posted by canugurl
Hi
Tough to know where to focus our comments without a specific question....so I'll focus on composition. My first impression was that the top of the building was cut off, which is too bad. The chopped tree is a bit distracting to the other white dome on the building, too.
What I do like is the crispness, the colours of the orange-brown trees with the blue sky and the path that draws my eye into the front door of the building.
I hadn't noticed the van before I read your comments, to be honest. 
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Yeah, the chopped off dome irritates me too. I may actually head back down there when I get some free time some day and try again. It's hard to get everything I want into the shot, because of the way the path is laid out. It's hard to find places to stand.