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Old 01-27-2008, 06:53 PM
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dstanl,

Composition is a powerful part of a photo. Here your subject seemed awkward on left. The diagonal (lightest petals) was centered and horizontal. Right half seemed empty.

Thought this had more interest, brings you in to photo to subject, holds you here. Explore, move around, read about composition, rule of thirds, etc.

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