Another one finished

[WVCoalMiner]

Learning more and more each day.
How's this?
This is my Model Mayhem cousin.

[SandeeWig]

Hi Tony. I really like the first one, beautiful! What a pretty girl!

Something seems off to me in the second. Not a fan of her pose/the angle, but mostly its the color of her face. It just doesn't seem right, but I can't tell if it's the processing or the small image, my monitor, or what?!

[Jamfke]

Yeah, both of these shots look great, but the second looks as if you might have overdone the saturation a bit with the yellow levels. Kind of gives her jaundiced skin. Otherwise, I love the depth of field.

great shots love the angles

[sHIMUZUKi]

yeah she a fine model i agree with the others about the 2

[Trigger]

The composure and composition are good and your cousin is very photogenic


cheers

[WVCoalMiner]

Thanks guys I will rework the 2nd one and see if maybe I overdid Portraiture on it.

[Tryfan67]

These are really nice portraits, they have a very soft feel to them.

[plangereis]

Hi Tony. I like both shots here. The thirds composition of the first shot, and the ledge as a leading line in the second shot work wonderfully! Nice work, and you have a great model in your niece. Cheers.