Graffiti Post!

[splphotography]

Photoshoot at Little Five Points in ATL. How is my contrast? saturation? sharpness? Let me know other things that you would do differently. Thanks!

Canon 60D with Tamron 28-75/f2.8

EXIF
IS200
48mm
f/3.5
1/80

[MrJones]

seems like a nice location but a different angle would have made it much more interesting.
you're calling it graffiti picture but the graffiti is hidden. instead of really enjoying the art on the wall with it's colors, you've chose to display only a tiny fraction of it in the right bottom of your picture.
I know the dumpster has some writings on it but it's not really flattering the girl, I think the wall would have been much more interesting.
another thing is the white shirt over the white wall.. doesn't really work.
as for you EXIF data - why shoot at 1/80 were the shakes of your hand can be seen in the picture (larger version) when you can bump the ISO to 400 or even 800 and enjoy a shutter speed of 1/320?

[splphotography]

Thanks for the input!..Honestly this was my firstshoot with the 60D. I have also upgraded my lens to the Canon 28-70/2.8L and have learned more about my camera. Improving more and hopefully can post more recent pictures.

[Hill Country Hack]

Originally Posted by MrJones

seems like a nice location but a different angle would have made it much more interesting.
you're calling it graffiti picture but the graffiti is hidden. instead of really enjoying the art on the wall with it's colors, you've chose to display only a tiny fraction of it in the right bottom of your picture.
I know the dumpster has some writings on it but it's not really flattering the girl, I think the wall would have been much more interesting.
another thing is the white shirt over the white wall.. doesn't really work.
as for you EXIF data - why shoot at 1/80 were the shakes of your hand can be seen in the picture (larger version) when you can bump the ISO to 400 or even 800 and enjoy a shutter speed of 1/320?

I fully agree with MrJones. Overall a well composed shot for what you did. The model is beautiful.
I feel a portrait angle shot to include the entire skirt would help this much more, as would something other that white blouse and to include more of the wall art.

Keep at it.