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Old 06-28-2010, 02:17 PM
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Smile Texture Process first Attempt

I'm currently on the process of learning textured images and I would
like to ask if I did a good job on the first attempt. Any suggestions to
improve and enhance the image better.

Thank you for your tips.


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Old 06-28-2010, 03:58 PM
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Nice job overall...
I think it's too hot in the upper left quarter, and the circles over the girl are detracting. I'd suggest removing the circles, reducing brightness of upper left corner, and then bringing up the brightness overall a little.
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Old 06-28-2010, 04:50 PM
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I agree with SK66. For me the texture used is too dark and gives a lot of contrast with the lights in the upper left corner. As for being your first attempt I think is a pretty good job!
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Old 06-29-2010, 04:42 PM
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Thanks guys for the very helpful comments.
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