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I grabbed your EXIF from your Flickr page:
Exposure: 0.005 sec (1/200) Aperture: f/2.2 Focal Length: 35 mm ISO Speed: 200 Exposure Bias: -5 EV Flash: On, Return not detected Take a look at the DOF Calculator. When shooting with a pretty open aperture like f/2.2, at 35mm, you need to be a bit further from your subject to get focus on both eyes. Hope this helps.
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ahh crap. Sorry for not posting EXIF, I totally forgot to do that. Thanks for the help everyone.
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I really like the warm backlit look but not having both eyes in focus does kinda hold it back. There is no reason you could not go with a much smaller aperture (say F5.6) since the background appears to be pretty far back. Having her hair in focus would be nice too but the eyes are what really count.
Not that it matters but why the -5 EV?
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I would also crop it higher so that you aren't cutting off her chin and the top of her head. Maybe portait orientation would have been better.
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idb Pentax K200D, 50/1.4, 35/2.8 macro, 90/2.8 macro, 18-55 kit zoom and 50-200 zoom, Sony DSCH-1 P&S with 12x zoom, plus a lot of 35mm Minolta gear. |
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