Thread: Kids Train Track
03-29-2012, 07:44 AM #1I'm new here!
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Kids Train Track
This image was captured with canon 1000d .A Couple weeks after purchasing the camera I shot with Auto Focus mode using flash.
Last edited by windrider86; 03-29-2012 at 02:57 PM.
03-29-2012, 12:29 PM #2
Kindly provide the Exif details. Secondly I feel there is a bit of depth of field issue in the photo. The train track is very nicely leading to the elephant cave....but there's too much detail elsewhere also. Its a bit distracting. The log on the right hand bottom corner was somehow poking out at me. The idea was good but i feel u should have used manual focus and large aperture(Lower f-stop) to give a shallow depth of field
03-29-2012, 01:48 PM #3
I like the overall idea of this shot because of the playful nature of it, but there are a few things I would like to see different. 1. Could you have gotten aligned with the front of the tunnel so you are looking down the elephant's throat? 2. A circular polarizer might have been able to get rid of the glare from the leaves and top of the elephant. 3. Get lower and closer. If you lined up with the mouth of the cave, got lower and a bit closer, you might have gotten the feeling of being swallowed by the elephant. If possible, try some of those suggestions and see what kind of results you get.
Thanks for sharing and keep shooting!
03-29-2012, 02:56 PM #4
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03-29-2012, 08:25 PM #5Used to be shruggy63
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And it's overexposed?