First Photo shoot..

[NikTyler]

Reposted in the correct thread.. WHOOPS!

And this is where I'm at.

Not even sure if this is up to even Amateur standards.. But as stated, My first shoot.

f/11
1/15
ISO -500




Rip this apart please, I would love some advice on making my shoots better.

Btw, This is my first post on this site. I am loving the community here and look forward to these forums.

[sourav]

I would have liked this pic centered and in a portrait mode, rather than a landscape, so that we would get a equal division between bright side and dark side.
Cheers

[Sistereinstein]

Sourav has a good point about equal division on light vs dark. I love the color and find the composition somewhat frightening - aren't those anime characters supposed to be cheerful? This is like the anti-anime, or the end result if Sailor Moon was accidentally transported into this reality.

Frightening, I say, Love those lashes too!

PS, comments all in fun. no offense meant.

[SwissJon]

What's happened to this thread.. It's supposed to be Landscape Critique.. This is obviously portraiture.