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I suppose the composition itself is ok, but it looks very flat and unoriginal. Try taking it from a lower angle so we're not just viewing it at eye-level (which is too ordinary). If you don't have a wider lens, you can at least give it that sense of vastness by changing shooting angle.
Also needs to be processed if you can't re-take the shot, it's not very sharp at all, either a smaller aperture or some PP such as bumping contrast, adding a strong high-pass filter, and trying to bring out some color in it. Maybe something like this ?
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A dramatic sky would have helped - sunset/rise, clouds etc...
And perhaps something in the foreground - The shot is all about modernity with yachts and skyscrapers so something in contrast to this might help - a really old fishing boat for example.... |
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