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blueshark
02-25-2008, 08:25 AM
<img src="http://i109.photobucket.com/albums/n80/pitya/mungachumel.jpg" width="600" />
this pic was taken Canon powershot A400 3.2 mp. please comment on my post.tq

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GEli
02-25-2008, 09:14 AM
It's not bad. Both the flower and sky are washed out - the flower can be fixed with levels, and the sky to a point as well. Also consider dropping the brightness of the sky by about a stop and increasing the contrast a bit to help show off the blues in the sky, as they're barely visible as it stands.

Your signature is definitely excessive. A simple name in the corner would be plenty, but the gigantic bar code taking up an 1/8th of the frame draws my attention long before I even notice it's a picture of a flower and holds my attention because I'm perplexed as to why it's there. Please consider a smaller signature.

Composition and framing are well done. The bokeh is surprisingly pleasing for a P+S and everything's nice and sharp.