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Murtasma
02-24-2008, 10:14 PM
<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/murtasma/2288954187/" title="Mouth Pains by Murtasma, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2253/2288954187_e81995f0e1.jpg" width="500" height="343" alt="Mouth Pains" /></a>

Exposure: 0.002 sec (1/500)
Aperture: f/2.8
Focal Length: 50 mm
ISO Speed: 200


I just had an idea so I decided to try it out and see if my photoshop skills could do it. I had a lot of trouble with the skin I shouldn't get it just right also I wasen't really sure what I wanted the skin to look like. I think the mouth turned out pretty good the skin became a problem blending it in with the stiches. Also the eyes I don't care for to much they are very white I tried changing the colors around for the whites but coudln't decide on anything besides what I ended up with. I am not so sure about the placement of the hands perhaps I should place my hand in front of my mouth or just under it. Also I think I need an expression of more pain on my face.

peeperita
03-01-2008, 03:23 PM
sorry for being so tardy to critique.....

i happen to like what you've done here in post.....even those too bright eyes that you dislike are good for me.....the crazy skin tones just add to the feeling i get of some horror flick surgery.....

i think you're well placed in the frame and your pose is that of a b movie victim......no way, i would have your hands over that mouth you worked so hard at to stitch shut.....

honestly, not a darned thing wrong with your work here.....

thanks for such a fun image.....i always enjoy your self portraits.....

peeper

twinkletoes
04-11-2008, 07:33 PM
wow how the hell do you do stitches i love that!

Murtasma
04-11-2008, 08:09 PM
wow how the hell do you do stitches i love that!

Blended another photograph of some stiches over the mouth then dodged and burned it.