deserted factory passage

[vesitata]

<a href="http://www.flickr.com/photos/22278827@N04/2242253083/" title="IMG_7032 by vesitata, on Flickr"><img src="http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2357/2242253083_7a208c7ac3.jpg" width="498" height="500" alt="IMG_7032" /></a>
A passage leaning about 30 degrees up in a deserted factory... we got in through a hole under the fence:P...lucky that the dogs were guarding only the gate:D
The lights were pretty harsh...it looked better in B&W...any suggestions?

[oriolhdz]

Hi vesitata:
While I like the angle where you shot it. For some reason (Don't know exactly why, must be the hard contrast) I like the way the b&w looks like but for some other reason I feel it's too dark. I took the liberty to explore your flickr accound the the image titled IMG_7040 (http://www.flickr.com/photos/22278827@N04/2243045300/) looks better because you can see the wall textures and exactly what is the actual state of the factory.
Anyway...it's a great shot. Thanks for sharing it!

[netbymatt]

It's a nice shot. The hard light works nicely considering it is an industrial setting.

If you're ever back there, you might want to try kicking up some dust before you take the picture. The light coming in the windows and through the dust would create a really nice effect, and help to emphasize that this place is deserted.