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dlmfoto
01-29-2008, 10:42 PM
this image i took becasuce of the way that the fence acts as a frame but also adds depth to the image giving the shot a since of how old this feild is.
1/90th f22 iso 200
canon 350D
geotography
01-30-2008, 12:26 AM
dlmfoto,
Let me begin with "I like your photo" for reasons of its good focus, colors and composition. I think it demonstrates that you have a good eye for a creative, pleasing shot. I think that it includes some deviations from fundamental rules about proportion of sky; however, I personally do not see how else you could have approached your composition. The fence does frame it in and sort of works as an abstract set of "third lines." It is quite nice.
Thanks for including EXIF. I would find it more convenient if you could include the image in the post; it makes it easier to go to revisit the photo while making written comments.
I like the photo, lovely rich colours, the maize/corn is the sweetest honey colour i have seen in a long time,
There is however one slight distraction for me, and that would be the fence, it is a good idea using it to frame and follow with the eyes, but i feel as though it might work a little bit better if the top and bottom barbed wire sections were both in the corners of the photo, whereas currently you only have the top one, just a thought, doesn't detract from the quality of the image though.
You might also want to try cloning out that little bit of stray fencing wire coming from the second post,
But, overall Great Shot!
ike,
BlueSage
04-17-2008, 10:15 PM
The golden background really makes the whole thing pop! Nice work.
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