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Arķel
01-26-2008, 10:19 AM
I can't remember what I did with this portrait... but it seems the best ones I take of my girlfriend are the ones where she's focusing on something else. Otherwise she kind of becomes a little self-conscious. What'd you think about it?
http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2350/2075003088_6a1688f6db.jpg (http://farm3.static.flickr.com/2350/2075003088_6a1688f6db_b.jpg)
(looks better large, just click it)
cadich
01-26-2008, 11:51 AM
Nice picture. Personal opinion : I would have liked to see the border of her face sharper (chin and cheek). Maybe with a bigger depth of field, to have all the face sharp but still keep the torso blurred?
Otherwise I like that the eye stands out as a black spot, slightly off center.
geotography
01-26-2008, 11:32 PM
Aerial, Hi,
I like this photograph because it has a particular contemporary creative appeal and it also captures this woman's beauty in a unique way. I am not liking the noise (grainyness) in the photo. What was you ISO setting?
Please include all your EXIF when you submit photographs. Also, the moderators have been reminding folks to try to ask specific questions so those doing review can hone in our your own concerns about the photo. This is a good idea along with your EXIF.
Like your shot.
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