The only thing I would change is cropping. If you take the left side all the way to the seam in her shirt and the bottom all the way to the stitching(getting rid of the hand), this would be a very strong portrait. I really like the eye contact, skin tones, and DoF. These really are nice shots and the comments are just tiny things to make them even better.
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Ok to edit and re-post on DPS. Always open to new ideas and critiquing.
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