I was going to suggest moving her more forward off the rear wall. There is no depth having her that close. Could you have opened your aperture more so you could have used a lower ISO? Did you try taking the shot multiple ways, like without the overhead light on or sans lamp? With f5.6 the focus is fine, but I think opening up could have have created more story and given more attention to a specific place. Also what is your white balance setting? She is really pink, I am a pale girl myself so know how that goes but the cool of the blue and the cool flush of the skin are really distracting.
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