I really like the first photograph. I think it is a little dark on her/face. I really like the composition though and the setting. If you have access to that place alot I'm sure we will be seeing some more shots from there! If you could have used some type of fill light it would have really set it off. Nice lighting on the second one. Also, I am no board police but be ready for some one to come by and tell you only one photo posted at a time in the critique section.
Thanks for sharing your photos though.