Personally I think you've done well. Posiibly crop the image slightly at the top, but other than that I like the transformation. You've taken an average photo and turned it into something interesting.
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Sony A200, Kit 18-70mm f3.5-5.6, 75-300mm f4.5-5.6, 35-50mm f4 Macro, Konika Minolta 3600 HSD Flash
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