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Old 11-11-2009, 12:20 PM
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Originally Posted by Kbaby View Post
Hi all,

This was one of my faves from my first attempt at a photoshoot with a girlfriend. I have generally focused more so on landscape photography or anything other than portraiture so I was pretty happy with how they turned out, especially seeing as all the lighting I had was a window and an industrial light! My only issue was the bed head which seems to be growing out of her head... Must pay more attention to composition next time!

I did a few minor touch ups with PS Elements (cleaned up her eyes, fixed the contrast and white balance) but any other suggestions or feedback as to how I could improve the shot would be greatly appreciated.

Thanks!

P1017128e

Olympus E-300
1/15sec @ f/3.9
ISO: 200


You can also see a few of the other shots on my Flikr page at:
Flickr: Kbabylicious' Photostream
There is a bit to much area above your subject and the chair to the right is distracting. Here is a quick edit.

Armando


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