First off, nice shot.
On my monitor (calibrated) it does seem a little warm/yellow. And you could have stood to drop down to 200 ISO or so, I've found that shutter speeds of 1/200 or so are plenty fast enough for portraiture work. I tend to take several shots of the exact same pose mostly to ensure one of them is in focus anyway - so any slight possible motion blur should be eliminated as well.
I would have posed her where there wasn't a board (or whatever that is) intersecting with her head, but otherwise the composition is nice and simple. I'd also pull back just a tad bit on the vignette.
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