[tvoelcker]

This is really a tough call.
I see why it intrigued you but certainly is a difficult shot to compose.
With the boat being so far to the left and not much to counter the weight on the right side of the frame it is causing it to be off balance.
The boat also appears to be a tad bit under-exposed but perhaps it is my monitor.
Perhaps a few more steps to the left so you could have place the sun a bit closer to the boat would have helped but to be honest I'm really grasping on how to improve the composition.
Your a far greater photographer then myself but I'm trying to help..