Looks much better. Unfortunately now it is a little unbalanced but better than the alternative. Composition is something that takes awhile to learn. You can go by the rule of threes but even then there are times to break those rules. It is trial and error all the way. In the beginning I would find a subject to photo and take it from multiple angles and pick the one that pleased me the most afterwards. But all in all you are the artist and just because someone may not agree with a particular approach of a shot there may be someone else that absolutely loves it. I also recommend that if you don't already have one getting a tripod. It is just about imperitive for all types of photography. You can only do so much without one. Keep shooting, and the more you will learn.
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