Funny enough the first thing I noticed was what seems to be either her shirt or her hands which appear slightly bunched at her midsection, and that was the most distracting thing to me. I'd probably either remove that in processing or change the pose slightly for future shots.
I do agree that a slightly less busy background would also make the shot more effective since it takes away from the shape of the silhouette a bit. I do like the use of the silhouette though.
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