We lost all the detail in her face in the second one maby only try dodgeing her eyes and bring the detail in her face back. Also with the frame setting you are doing a visual crop on her hair try adding a frame around the origanal image which has good compisition.
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Nikon D200
Portrait Grip
AF-S Nikkor 18-200 f3.5-5.6 DX VR
AF-S Nikkor 70-300 f4.5-5.6 VR
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