Way too busy and the sharp contrast of the pasted images is way too harsh.
Also, the background or base image looks like a pic of a restaurant, not flattering at all to the collage.
The oval vignette is skewed as well.
It looks like a really quick and dirty edit with no thought to composition.
I don't mean to sound so harsh but you need to know so you can learn from it and work on your technique.
It's an interesting concept that could look awesome if more time and care are taken in post.
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