Don't be nervous--the people on this forum are really nice! I'm hardly an expert but--good job capturing the action. The tilted composition works well here because it makes a nice triangle out of the trampoline and the tree, and it leaves your husband oriented upward. I agree with you that it would be nice if he was below the tree, in the middle of the triangle. In my opinion the building is saved from being too distacting by being alligned parallel with the trampoline. The backlighting makes tree and husband a little dark, and the grey sky is kind of bland.
Let's hear it for grandparents with trampolines.
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