I really like the idea of the shot, but the composition doesn't work for me. The way the people and the lines in the fence repeat is pleasing to the eye and then the strong curve of the curb makes a nice interesting counter point. Black and white really allows these lines to play with each other.
What I would do is crop all the trees. I would all the way down to the top horizontal line in the fence. I also agree with the person who said the legs are distracting in the cut off person, if you crop that person though you loose the strongest part of the curve. So personally I would work on cloning them out, because without the curve, the photo doesn't work.
It is a nice capture. I like the interaction of all the people and lines.
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