[Art]

Hi all this pic was taken in 3 shoots later they were swen

Can you please critic composition?

Thanks Art

EXIF
Maker=EASTMAN KODAK COMPANY
Model=KODAK V570 DUAL LENS DIGITAL CAMERA
Color Space=sRGB
Scene Capture Type=Standard
Exposure Mode=Auto Exposure
Shutter Speed Value=1/1000 Second
Aperture Value=5.00
Flash=Off
ISO Speed Rating=ISO64