Its one of those "It should work but it doesn't quite" type of shots. You have followed all of the rules such as thirds and foreground interest but it seems something is lacking.
Unforunately that is about as usefull a critique as you will get from me as I don't know what is lacking!
On the PP side it does look at bit over staturated and over sharpended.
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