You need to provide exif data. It's on the picture's flickr page, on the right towards the bottom under additional information. Just click "more properties" and then copy and paste it. It can make critiques easier for people.
I think Snowdust is right but I will add a little more. With this kind of pose you either come in tighter to focus on the expressions or I would come out completely and show the whole picture so that you can see them holding hands or hugging, and her leaning into him. With it being in the middle, it looks more like a cheesy and cute snapshot.
Something to try...crop it closer and make it black and white. I think that would be pretty.
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