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Old 02-11-2009, 03:09 AM
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Sorry there Electric Sky but your post got buried rather quickly. I try to critique as many pictures as possible and especially ones that I feel I might actually be able to say something inspiring or partially intelligent.
Don't have much experience with bridge shots but the fact you took this from a moving car is amazing considering how clear it is.
The bridge is rather dark thus not allowing much texture. However, perhaps a silouhette is what you was going for?
The right side of the frame isn't doing much for me. There is just way too much black negative space that doesn't seem to add anything to the composition. However, I do like the tree at the top of this big black mass..
What intrigues me the most is the support beams coming up from the bottom. Is that some type of scaffolding or something around it? I really like the intersesting lines that are silouhetted from it.
Anyways hope I was of some help.
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