A two-light setup can give very nice results, and I've got the feeling you're quite close. The UV doesn't really matter to me, but the cool/warm contrast does. It seems that both light sources are lower than her face - try placing them opposite of each other, so one high and one low.
The UV does seem to be a bit over-exposed.
Digital cameras are hardly sensitive to UV light. Instead of using UV, you could simply try another strobe with a blue or violet filter on it. That would allow you to reduce your exposure time to 1/200th at 100 ISO, making the photo sharper and less noisy.
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