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Old 09-17-2008, 10:44 AM
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Patchie, Welcome

Many cameras that are not SLR are used to make very good photos here on DPS. You have done well here, in detail and composition. I find my attention keeps moving quickly to the left, so that I never quite get into the image all the way.

If the coin, lit as it is, were moved over to the right side, that might work better. Or if the lighting came from the right, so the coin's bright side was on the right in its left-side composition. In other words, it seems too dark on the right half+.
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