Great smile. This is clearly a girl having a good time. As far as the brightness goes, I think there is a challenging contrast between too much light (her right cheek, chin, etc) and too little light (her left eye). Maybe try with a bit of flash to lighten up the darker areas and a bit smaller aperture to lessen the overall brightness.
Take my thoughts with a grain of salt as I am very new at making photographs instead of pictures.
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