vjc724, Welcome
Thanks for a neat post. That's helpful to Critiquers, and saves us time.
I'd be OK having this in my viewfinder, but would have moved back just a little to include all the main bloom, and place the bud in a less constricted corner. Beautiful color (cloudy day?) and interesting depth of field. I would be careful about focusing: the closest petal is very OOF, and distracts because it is in front. If you can go to f/8 or above, you will more likely get all the bloom in focus.
Just feels tight in the frame.
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Last edited by jiminyClickit; 06-19-2008 at 02:40 PM.
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