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Old 06-10-2008, 06:04 PM
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i like the composition of the shot. my one critique would be my eye doesn't know whether to focus on the sign or the guitar case, which makes it feel a little cluttered even though i don't think it is. maybe you could blur the background a bit and leave the guitar case in focus? the letters are big enough that you could still read the sign even if it were a little out of focus, but your eyes would be drawn to a single point.
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