Hi and welcome to DPS. It is tough to position yourself to eliminate such distractions with shots like these. I agree that it needs a little more "space" in the cropping. Unfortunately, the way the jets are facing coupled with the numeric sequence on the tails, you come into the shot of the left side and quickly "read" you way out the right side. There isn't anything there to keep the viewer's eye with the frame very long. That is an impressive kit you have in your signature line.
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Sincerely,
Lee -clockdoc-
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